Rough cut

For our thiller while we were creating the video we uploaded a rough version of our work so we could collect feedback on what people liked and dident like about it. The feedback we got back was that people liked our variety of shots but wernt to keen on the story as well as the quality of our video in some places.

The footage we showed this people has been embedded below.

To fix our criticisms that we received we decided the best way to fix would be to reshoot the footage, because of this it also meant we could change our story.